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| + | == Notes Winter 2017 == | ||
| + | * The lead here is really pretty strong. | ||
| + | * Background section is written in a kind of choppy way. Could we smooth this out? | ||
| + | * Is the ethical analysis written in the correct tone / voice for this format? | ||
| + | * The ethical analysis touches on the difference between online and offline actions. We have readings that could push this analysis a little further. | ||
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| + | == Previous Semester Notes == | ||
This should be updated to note the newer diablo games. [[User:Brownman|Brownman]] ([[User talk:Brownman|talk]]) 16:39, 24 October 2012 (EDT) | This should be updated to note the newer diablo games. [[User:Brownman|Brownman]] ([[User talk:Brownman|talk]]) 16:39, 24 October 2012 (EDT) | ||
Latest revision as of 15:13, 17 April 2017
Notes Winter 2017
- The lead here is really pretty strong.
- Background section is written in a kind of choppy way. Could we smooth this out?
- Is the ethical analysis written in the correct tone / voice for this format?
- The ethical analysis touches on the difference between online and offline actions. We have readings that could push this analysis a little further.
Previous Semester Notes
This should be updated to note the newer diablo games. Brownman (talk) 16:39, 24 October 2012 (EDT)
