Talk:Benjamin Zeffer
Hi hi! It's me! Your very first visual captures exactly what you wanted to get across - who you were, and the fact that you are very obviously not single. I think you started out by talking about how your audiences and use of social media platforms differ, but you should tie in the concepts you outlined below on how that describes who you are, why you value what you do, and how that affects how you represent yourself online. You have some good sources, so be sure to do that! Good luck. -- Sharanya Jayendraprasad
hey benjamin! i liked the structure of your page, as well as your focus on the permanence of internet content—it ties back into 410's focus on the difficulties of maintaining an online identity. your analysis of your own activity through this lens was interesting, and i also liked your mentioning of how the affordances of different social media platforms shape usage. there's a lot of content in the topic of authenticity online, and i think you could go into more detail about how facebook's idea of an authentic person can reduce forms of internet expression, and explore what this means for those looking to capture who they are online. other than that, your ideas flowed well, and you did a good job tying in the readings. —matt wolfgram
Corina
Great work, Benjamin!
For the revision, focus on making this piece more about your online identity and less (even though you do a great job at it!) about the general topic of online identity representations.
When revising, consider your colleagues’ comments above.
Please consider them fully for your revision.
If you have any questions, or need help, please let me know.
Best,
Corina
