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First, I loved how you compared your online identity as a caricature of your real identity. I thought that was a great metaphor. I think it’s great how you showcased all aspects of your online search with both the accurate information and inaccurate information that is available about yourself on the internet as well as utilizing a diverse set of search engines to help you achieve that. The fact that you had the intuition that your search results might have been tailored to you and found ways around that through the use of incognito mode was also a very smart approach as a way to understand what typical users may see when they search for your name online. You were very clear about a lot of information online being mostly accurate in relation to you to the point where it was quite frightening, but also made sure to address that there was also some information not entirely accurate or even related to you at all. | First, I loved how you compared your online identity as a caricature of your real identity. I thought that was a great metaphor. I think it’s great how you showcased all aspects of your online search with both the accurate information and inaccurate information that is available about yourself on the internet as well as utilizing a diverse set of search engines to help you achieve that. The fact that you had the intuition that your search results might have been tailored to you and found ways around that through the use of incognito mode was also a very smart approach as a way to understand what typical users may see when they search for your name online. You were very clear about a lot of information online being mostly accurate in relation to you to the point where it was quite frightening, but also made sure to address that there was also some information not entirely accurate or even related to you at all. | ||
| − | While you do discuss the relationship between your online identity and your real identity, a majority of your page only states what kind of information online about you is accurate or inaccurate. I would love to see more of an analyzed comparison and contrast on how your online identity relates to your real identity. Other than that, I think your overall style and flow of writing were absolutely stellar. Good job! | + | While you do discuss the relationship between your online identity and your real identity, a majority of your page only states what kind of information online about you is accurate or inaccurate. I would love to see more of an analyzed comparison and contrast on how your online identity relates to your real identity. Maybe consider what the information portrayed online of you can lead other people to think about your identity and how that correlates with your real identity. Other than that, I think your overall style and flow of writing were absolutely stellar. Good job! |
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Comment by Kevin Zheng:
Hey Avinash, I really enjoyed reading your avatar page!
First, I loved how you compared your online identity as a caricature of your real identity. I thought that was a great metaphor. I think it’s great how you showcased all aspects of your online search with both the accurate information and inaccurate information that is available about yourself on the internet as well as utilizing a diverse set of search engines to help you achieve that. The fact that you had the intuition that your search results might have been tailored to you and found ways around that through the use of incognito mode was also a very smart approach as a way to understand what typical users may see when they search for your name online. You were very clear about a lot of information online being mostly accurate in relation to you to the point where it was quite frightening, but also made sure to address that there was also some information not entirely accurate or even related to you at all.
While you do discuss the relationship between your online identity and your real identity, a majority of your page only states what kind of information online about you is accurate or inaccurate. I would love to see more of an analyzed comparison and contrast on how your online identity relates to your real identity. Maybe consider what the information portrayed online of you can lead other people to think about your identity and how that correlates with your real identity. Other than that, I think your overall style and flow of writing were absolutely stellar. Good job!
