Talk:Annabel Allen

Review from Laura McCallum:

The amount of accurate data you were able to find on yourself was really interesting! You did a great job of making it personal and being thorough with your searches. How cool is it that your parents made you a website when you were a baby! I liked the addition of hyperlinks to the sites you had mentioned, I failed to do this on my profile and I will be adding these in my revision. It would be helpful if you added a caption to the first image you display so that we know where the image came from, or if you just added it for us to know what you look like. You did a great job of commenting on the large amount of data that is available for people who try to search you. What would be helpful to add is more discussion on if you support this much data being out there about you or if you wish there was less. Are there any steps you would take to remove data about you from the internet? Great job overall, I enjoyed reading your profile!

Review from Jun Cheng Tan:

I thought it was awesome how your father maintained a website on you and kept it up as a form of a social media platform before such platforms trended. I believe that a possible approach to improving could be to assess how different you believe your data portrays you as compared to who you actually are. You bring up the points of how these data brokerage firms lack the information (fortunately) to determine your political affiliations and the like, but your analysis could be more rigorous in contrasting what information you found available on yourself. Your data identity statement flowed really well, from details that you were comfortable revealing to personal information that was more core to your own personal identity. I personally found your battle with other "Annabel Allen"s for online prominence to be rather amusing and I personally had the same issue going on for my own name. Enjoyed reading your profile and I hope you still have that domain name under you right now!