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| + | The amount of accurate data you were able to find on yourself was really interesting! You did a great job of making it personal and being thorough with your searches. How cool is it that your parents made you a website when you were a baby! I liked the addition of hyperlinks to the sites you had mentioned, I failed to do this on my profile and I will be adding these in my revision. It would be helpful if you added a caption to the first image you display so that we know where the image came from, or if you just added it for us to know what you look like. You did a great job of commenting on the large amount of data that is available for people who try to search you. What would be helpful to add is more discussion on if you support this much data being out there about you or if you wish there was less. Are there any steps you would take to remove data about you from the internet? | ||
| + | Great job overall, I enjoyed reading your profile! | ||
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Review from Laura McCallum:
The amount of accurate data you were able to find on yourself was really interesting! You did a great job of making it personal and being thorough with your searches. How cool is it that your parents made you a website when you were a baby! I liked the addition of hyperlinks to the sites you had mentioned, I failed to do this on my profile and I will be adding these in my revision. It would be helpful if you added a caption to the first image you display so that we know where the image came from, or if you just added it for us to know what you look like. You did a great job of commenting on the large amount of data that is available for people who try to search you. What would be helpful to add is more discussion on if you support this much data being out there about you or if you wish there was less. Are there any steps you would take to remove data about you from the internet? Great job overall, I enjoyed reading your profile!
