Talk:Andrew Rabines

George Dixon

One of the strongest aspects of your paper was its ability to convey your personality. Both through a conversational tone as well as a sprinkling of colloquial phrases, I felt like I got a sense of who you are are a person, just a little. In addition, I also found myself genuinely interested in your report, most notable with regards to the russian knock-off of instagram. It's clear that you used google extensively to exhaust all possible online representations of your online identity, especially in relation to the role of this pay-wall, which you gave a clear boundary to within your data identity report.

Just a super small, aesthetic improvement I would make is to pictures. I also struggled with using MediaWiki's incredibly unintuitive UX, but I found that if you look on the left hand column of your page, you can click the link labeled "upload file". From here, just make sure the file name corresponds with the one you uploaded. I'd also potentially spend more time talking about the concept of what is an identity and how that relates to your online identity. There are some cool, more philosophical readings within this class' curriculum that could help you support the idea of a "true" identity and what that means to you.