Difference between revisions of "Talk:Amanda Gomez"
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| − | I appreciate your identification of the contrast between your four selves. This was a super interesting perspective on divergent identities. Your inclusion of the “sex offenders nearby” image was a nice touch. Your statement regarding your genuine identity being a blend between these four online depictions is well-put. However, I wish you took this a bit further and/or explained how this relationship may connect to some course concepts. Also, I wonder if your online persona really is a “somewhat perfect version” of yourself, as you describe in your conclusion; it would be helpful if you defined “perfect” in this context. Does perfect mean absolutely accurate? Or does it mean that you are portrayed as “good”? Overall, you effectively juxtapose your two identities - and your statement was organized logically (the headings were helpful with flow as well). | + | Comment by Joseph Stempel: |
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| + | I appreciate your identification of the contrast between your four selves. This was a super interesting perspective on divergent identities. Your inclusion of the “sex offenders nearby” image was a nice touch. Your statement regarding your genuine identity being a blend between these four online depictions is well-put. However, I wish you took this a bit further and/or explained how this relationship may connect to some course concepts. Also, I wonder if your online persona really is a “somewhat perfect version” of yourself, as you describe in your conclusion; it would be helpful if you defined “perfect” in this context. Does perfect mean absolutely accurate? Or does it mean that you are portrayed as “good”? Overall, you effectively juxtapose your two identities - and your statement was organized logically (the headings were helpful with flow as well). | ||
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Comment by Joseph Stempel:
I appreciate your identification of the contrast between your four selves. This was a super interesting perspective on divergent identities. Your inclusion of the “sex offenders nearby” image was a nice touch. Your statement regarding your genuine identity being a blend between these four online depictions is well-put. However, I wish you took this a bit further and/or explained how this relationship may connect to some course concepts. Also, I wonder if your online persona really is a “somewhat perfect version” of yourself, as you describe in your conclusion; it would be helpful if you defined “perfect” in this context. Does perfect mean absolutely accurate? Or does it mean that you are portrayed as “good”? Overall, you effectively juxtapose your two identities - and your statement was organized logically (the headings were helpful with flow as well).
