Talk:Alexa Rathi

Comment from William Babbitt - Hi Alexa, I want to start by saying this was a very interesting wiki page. In particular I thought that the way you broke up the page into your different specific searches was clever and made it easy to follow how you went about researching yourself. I also like your use of bold text in the introduction to point out what your main argument would be for the page. One thing I think you could consider revisiting though is how you approach that argument for the rest of the wiki page. The first part of your argument, about the two version of yourself, is well addressed in the "Decoding Data" section, but the second part about time isn't really touched on again. I think you could change the ending where you talk about privacy laws to reflect on the time aspect of your thesis, or change the thesis to talk about privacy laws and it would better tie the piece together. Also in the bulleted list of versions of yourself under the "Decoding Data" section, you list "who you are biologically" but then don't go on to explain that point. I would have liked to have see that explained further. Overall though I think this is an interesting argument that you are making and it is well formatted.