Difference between revisions of "Talk:Alex Wang"
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I really like that you used many subheadings under each section. It made it really easy to follow along when you changed topics and it feels more like a real Wiki page as well! Your claim, in the beginning, was very clear and was well supported by your information about your Google searches along with your preferences about social media. | I really like that you used many subheadings under each section. It made it really easy to follow along when you changed topics and it feels more like a real Wiki page as well! Your claim, in the beginning, was very clear and was well supported by your information about your Google searches along with your preferences about social media. | ||
There are some spots that I think could make your page even better with a few edits. First, there are a few typos throughout your Wiki page. A quick re-read should do the trick. Second, I feel like the subheadings about your data identity being incomplete and unauthentic could be put into one subheading. While there is a slight difference between the two, I feel like they are similar enough to put together. The last thing that I would like to suggest is adding more to the subsection labeled Privacy Concerns. The idea discussed in that paragraph could easily be related to some class readings. Other than that, I think your Wiki page looks great! | There are some spots that I think could make your page even better with a few edits. First, there are a few typos throughout your Wiki page. A quick re-read should do the trick. Second, I feel like the subheadings about your data identity being incomplete and unauthentic could be put into one subheading. While there is a slight difference between the two, I feel like they are similar enough to put together. The last thing that I would like to suggest is adding more to the subsection labeled Privacy Concerns. The idea discussed in that paragraph could easily be related to some class readings. Other than that, I think your Wiki page looks great! | ||
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Comment from Patrick Tse: Hi Alex! I really liked reading your Wiki page!
I really like that you used many subheadings under each section. It made it really easy to follow along when you changed topics and it feels more like a real Wiki page as well! Your claim, in the beginning, was very clear and was well supported by your information about your Google searches along with your preferences about social media.
There are some spots that I think could make your page even better with a few edits. First, there are a few typos throughout your Wiki page. A quick re-read should do the trick. Second, I feel like the subheadings about your data identity being incomplete and unauthentic could be put into one subheading. While there is a slight difference between the two, I feel like they are similar enough to put together. The last thing that I would like to suggest is adding more to the subsection labeled Privacy Concerns. The idea discussed in that paragraph could easily be related to some class readings. Other than that, I think your Wiki page looks great!
