Difference between revisions of "Talk:Alex Ridener"
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On the other hand, I really like your analysis of your behavior, especially about how the lack of social norms on early Facebook influenced your early Internet usage and allowed you to act in non-target ways. Especially, as the target audience for the site changed with time. I think that would be interesting to elaborate and write further analysis on. Additionally, I think you should make use of the wiki-style headings and make the headings more accurately describe your Facebook behavior. (ex. “trolling days”, “Facebook group days”, etc.) Also, I think your comment about the being a bystander is really insightful, and you include some analysis related to course readings and materials. As you edit, ask yourself: how much can a reader tell about you from the profile, is it correct?" | On the other hand, I really like your analysis of your behavior, especially about how the lack of social norms on early Facebook influenced your early Internet usage and allowed you to act in non-target ways. Especially, as the target audience for the site changed with time. I think that would be interesting to elaborate and write further analysis on. Additionally, I think you should make use of the wiki-style headings and make the headings more accurately describe your Facebook behavior. (ex. “trolling days”, “Facebook group days”, etc.) Also, I think your comment about the being a bystander is really insightful, and you include some analysis related to course readings and materials. As you edit, ask yourself: how much can a reader tell about you from the profile, is it correct?" | ||
-- Chalse Okorom | -- Chalse Okorom | ||
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| + | Your autobiography is very interesting. | ||
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Revision as of 22:56, 17 February 2018
"Your progression with your use of Facebook was really interesting. When you started your post, I noticed you talked a lot about the history of Facebook (and Myspace) as platforms, but I think your wiki would benefit from more information about your history with Facebook and Myspace; the reader knows these historical details. Your post read more like an autobiography of social media instead of an autobiography of your social media usage. When you revise, you should think about what readers are learning about you through your Facebook usage. On the other hand, I really like your analysis of your behavior, especially about how the lack of social norms on early Facebook influenced your early Internet usage and allowed you to act in non-target ways. Especially, as the target audience for the site changed with time. I think that would be interesting to elaborate and write further analysis on. Additionally, I think you should make use of the wiki-style headings and make the headings more accurately describe your Facebook behavior. (ex. “trolling days”, “Facebook group days”, etc.) Also, I think your comment about the being a bystander is really insightful, and you include some analysis related to course readings and materials. As you edit, ask yourself: how much can a reader tell about you from the profile, is it correct?"
-- Chalse Okorom
Your autobiography is very interesting.
--Cami Johnson
