Talk:Advait Shroff

I like how you are very descriptive in the different approaches you used and the different results that you get in return. It demonstrated your genuine effort in searching for your online identity and also showed me some interesting results that I didn't encounter when I was doing the search process for myself. For example, I wasn't able to find any information about the organizations that I am affiliated with online. I also enjoyed reading your personal reflection on those search result, such as the conclusion that your online identity reveals different aspects of you in different contexts. I would love to hear if you think the sum of those results can represent a holistic view of who you are or will they still portray you in a biased way? And what would you thoughts be if you do find that your identity online is being presented in a somewhat biased way? Hopefully these are somethings that you can consider in your future revisions. And lastly, it was also interesting to see the search process through the perspective of someone with an international background. I wonder if you may find different results about yourself if you searched yourself on the prevailing search platform in India (not sure if there is one or if you can access to it in the US haha, but it would be interesting if you can). It's unfortunate that none of your inserted pictures showed up, but I am sure it will be a quick fix in later revisions. Other than that, I like your writing style, it is very clear and straight to the point. And I also like how in the end you have a breakdown of your evaluation on different social media platforms and also a summary section.

Commenter: Kevin Jiang (kevjiang)