Talk:Abbey Warren

Hi Abbey - First, I'd like to say that I think the structure of your autobiography is very easy to follow and I like that you started off by describing how your profile pictures each represent a different phase of your life. I think profile pictures are a huge part of Facebook so this structure flowed well and made sense to me.

I also like that you talked from a third-person perspective and were able to criticize your past self like when you say some posts "showcased her childishness", but throughout the post you switch to a first-person point of view unexpectedly, whereas I thought it may have been more effective to just stick with one voice throughout.

My favorite portion was the discussion on "friends" and the way you explained how different friends taught you different things in life. I thought this was insightful and showed that you really thought about the way your Facebook friends contributed to your identity. Your ending was strong as well because you tied in all your identities (the different Abbey's) and leave the reader wanting to find out more.

Overall, I thought you did a nice job describing how Facebook does show who you are as a person, but that this person is always changing therefore Facebook may never capture who you are in the current moment. Good work! - Joana