Talk:Aaron Zhang

Comment from Roland Park: Hey Aaron, I really enjoyed reading your page. First I think you did a great job setting the stage for your page. You give the reader your background concisely and hit all the points on why it might be difficult for you to find yourself on a search engine. I may suggest adding in a sentence or two acknowledging how common your last name is and how that might additionally make it more difficult for you to find yourself online. The flow of story telling of your paper is great and the topics that you go through flow nicely. I found your descriptions of your video game profile and password management tool to be a great supplement in crafting an online identity with what you have. I might suggest looking into the privacy policy of your video game data on you. Although the video game clearly has a lot of information on your in-game statistics and interactions, I'm curious if the video game company's have more information on you than you think (might be a dead end I wouldn't really know). Lastly, supplementing your argument with the readings was a nice touch that added to you piecing together your data identity in your eyes. Overall, you did a great job writing your profile!