John Walsh Thesis Revision
From SI410
This page is an exercise in revising a massively plagiarized master's thesis by paraphrasing portions of the text that were either quoted without attribution (no citation) or quoted inappropriately (no quotation marks). In both cases we will re-write individual paragraphs and deposit the results here, by page number.
Here is a link to the New York Times article.
Instructions:
- Cut a piece of text from the page represented in The New York Times article.
- Paste on your personal notebook.
- Edit to rephrase, avoiding close paraphrasing as much as possible.
- Cut and past results into this document on the proper page in the proper order, if possible
- Do minor formatting or editing as needed.
- BONUS. If you are editing a passage without attribution, insert the reference
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