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Revision as of 18:12, 14 March 2018

This page is an exercise in revising a massively plagiarized master's thesis by paraphrasing portions of the text that were either quoted without attribution (no citation) or quoted inappropriately (no quotation marks). In both cases we will re-write individual paragraphs and deposit the results here, by page number.

Here is a link to the New York Times article.

Instructions:

  1. Cut a piece of text from the page represented in The New York Times article.
  2. Paste on your personal notebook.
  3. Edit to rephrase, avoiding close paraphrasing as much as possible.
  4. Cut and past results into this document on the proper page in the proper order, if possible
  5. Do minor formatting or editing as needed.
  6. BONUS. If you are editing a passage without attribution, insert the reference

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