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While the idea that more democracies in the world would theoretically advance U.S. and global interests, the United States should remember that the concept of a democracy is neither inherently good or bad, it is is neutral and the U.S. must be careful when attempting to spread democracy. | While the idea that more democracies in the world would theoretically advance U.S. and global interests, the United States should remember that the concept of a democracy is neither inherently good or bad, it is is neutral and the U.S. must be careful when attempting to spread democracy. | ||
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| + | The United States has spread democracy throughout the rest of society for a significant amount of time. Due to this, one can’t underestimate the significance of democracy, as its influence has been felt by many regions. Although its influence has been felt, there has been a wide range of opinions regarding democracy and its implementation. These disagreements range from framework to the founding variables. Since there is a wide disagreement on its founding values, theory, and prerequisites it can be difficult to come to a concrete definition. | ||
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Revision as of 21:12, 14 March 2018
This page is an exercise in revising a massively plagiarized master's thesis by paraphrasing portions of the text that were either quoted without attribution (no citation) or quoted inappropriately (no quotation marks). In both cases we will re-write individual paragraphs and deposit the results here, by page number.
Here is a link to the New York Times article.
Instructions:
- Type on your personal notebook a piece of text (paragraph) from the page represented in the New York Times article of July 23, 2014.
- Edit to rephrase in your own words, avoiding close paraphrasing as much as possible.
- Cut and past results into this document on the proper page in the proper order, if possible.
- Do minor formatting or editing as needed.
- BONUS. If you are editing a passage without attribution, insert the reference.
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While the idea that more democracies in the world would theoretically advance U.S. and global interests, the United States should remember that the concept of a democracy is neither inherently good or bad, it is is neutral and the U.S. must be careful when attempting to spread democracy.
Defining Democracy
The United States has spread democracy throughout the rest of society for a significant amount of time. Due to this, one can’t underestimate the significance of democracy, as its influence has been felt by many regions. Although its influence has been felt, there has been a wide range of opinions regarding democracy and its implementation. These disagreements range from framework to the founding variables. Since there is a wide disagreement on its founding values, theory, and prerequisites it can be difficult to come to a concrete definition.
