Talk:Akash Bajpai
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Ruth Moon
Hello Akash, I enjoyed reading your statement. Overall, I think you did a good job discussing the information the data brokers were able to collect about you. I agree with your suspicions that the data broker system is underwhelming and only searches as much as it needs to. Many people have even found discrepancies between things like their age and birth date. In your expectations post you do a better job of connecting your statement with your personal life. I think you could improve this by expanding upon your personal beliefs regarding the use of your personal information online in the introduction.