Talk:Pratik Goswami

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From Thomas Van Conett

Hi Pratik,

Despite your lack of an online footprint, I was excited to read your story. It is so strange that even though you have a prolific presence on social media and the internet at large that you don't have some sort of existing data profile. It's interesting you feel both insulted and and comforted with the lack of data present about you aggregated on the internet, and while you talk about how you associate your anonymity more as being synonymous with irrelevance, I would love to hear more about what part of being unknown gives you comfort. You might try other search engines to see if there is any information on any of them that may pick up on one of your social media pages. If information of you exists in the public info-sphere, despite your name, I wonder if one of them would pick up on the real you. There exists a few areas in your Wiki where grammar could be worked on to make your sentences flow more easily, though the reuse of some words seems to be the worst culprit (I.E. using RDJ's name twice in close proximity, as well as words like "presence," and "increased" to give some other examples). These are easy fixes though, and I think you have a strong base for a wonderful article.