Talk:Olajide Jegede

Ananya Sharma comment:

Hi Olajide! I really like the detail of information you added pertaining to your google search, it really brings to light the extent of personal information that is publicly available. Furthermore, you bring up a very relevant point with the low barrier to entry for a lot of the data sites, which could potentially attract malicious internet participants. It is definitely something to think about!

To improve, I would suggest imbedding your pictures into the body of the article as it would really complement some of the important factors that you mention. I also think having a more distinctive conclusion would create a strong end to your post and effectively summarize key points you mentioned. As professor Conway noted, it would be interesting to compare how your image on digital platforms and social media websites differs from your true self. Given the sheer amount of information you found in your google search, it would be valuable to examine its validity and accuracy of representation. Overall, it was a very interesting post and you could definitely expand on some great points!