Talk:Chris Pena

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Caitlyn Zawideh's Comments:

Hi Chris, I found your data identity statement really interesting. I really liked the tone and voice of your introduction, and it sets up the content of the rest of your statement really well. I think it's great that you dove into the data identities of some of the other people that share your name, and you made an interesting point about the benefit of relative online anonymity when people with your name are seeking out the opposite by trying to have a strong online presence. One thing I would consider adding your statement, because we're asked for it to be autobiographical, is a little more information about you. Was there anything you expected to see show up that didn't? Also, I would suggest that you align your images to the right so they're more integrated into the format of your page, so you can have less white space. Overall, great job and good luck with the next draft!