Talk:Katie Forrest

Hi Katie,

First off, very intriguing opening. It grabbed my attention right away. I would consider adding in just a little bit more context for an introduction but it shouldn't need to be too long.

I really like the tone you use throughout this piece of writing. It's feels more like you're having a conversation with the reader beyond just trying to describe your actions. It was a really unique way of how you set up the context of this piece. I like the stalking concept you took and how you were able to integrate your entire piece to flow that way. I also love how you are able to add in a few doses of Floridi here and there.

I would break up the Instagram section a little bit. I know you mention that is where most of the information is but it still seems a bit long for my taste. Maybe consider putting the last two paragraphs in a new section since it mentions LinkedIn?

I love that you mention the BeenVerified bit but it seems a bit out of place with your social media adventure and your final thoughts. Maybe think of a better way to integrate everything? Or even consider if you need it in the first place.

Your final thoughts are truly authentic and your growth is apparent.

Great Job Katie!

-Rachel Chang