Talk:Brandon Levine

Brandon, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your article. I definitely can relate to a considerable amount of what you said. I thought the point where you say “I don't find the risk of a Facebook post backfiring worth the social reward of posting that content on Facebook” was articulated very well and something I agree with. I do have a few suggestions for you. While the pictures are a nice touch, I believe that they could be placed more effectively to be more engaging with the readers. Currently, they are sitting at the bottom of the article, I would aim to put these pictures in more relevant places. Additionally, when you discuss your early age use of Facebook, the insertion of a picture near this section would be very useful and could even potentially provide comedic relief. While I think you do a good job of engaging with yourself and your personal identity in this piece, I think that you could go deeper in your analysis and offer more breadth to your readers. Aim to get more personal with your audience. All in all, I enjoyed reading your content and found myself relating to many of your points. With a few minor tweaks, this will be a great post.

-Alex Ridener