Talk:Allison Arnold
Allison, I really enjoyed reading through your article! I like how you have kind of broken down the social norm barriers and are not afraid to post very often. I also really like how you portray yourself as authentic and always stay true to yourself. I would say I am quite similar in how we use Facebook as a platform, I think its a great place advocate for any cause. Inspiring and positively motivating others if what I think I love the most about Facebook.
As a whole I think your article was a great read but in terms of what I think you could improve on, I would say possibly the structure or organization could have been arranged a little differently and allowed for an easier read. I know the picture are very hard to organize, but maybe separating them and wrapping text could have made it easier for the reader. I think it would have also helped to add maybe one section to really analyze what you post before going into the Authentically, Me section. Other than that I really like how your analyzed the theme confession online in terms of your profile. I give you props for your willingness to share those events of your life to help spread awareness. Overall, great job Allison!
Best, Alissa E.