Talk:Nicole Zeffer

Hi Nicole - I enjoyed reading your insights about your Facebook profile! First, I like that you describe how you think Facebook has changed from people posting about personal updates and feelings to posting about more general updates and events, and how you went against this trend. Although I knew what you meant, you described the more personal posts as "those kind of posts". Here, I think you could have been more detailed about what you were referring to. I also thought you did a nice job showcasing the way you changed - by not spending as much emotional effort on curation and how this change didn't just occur online, but in your daily life as well, showing it was an authentic part of your identity. Overall, I thought you brought up really interesting points like the "burden of curation", but I thought you could have added more sections and gone deeper into your reflection of other elements of Facebook besides posts. Good work! - Joana