Talk:Madison Goforth

Comment 1

First of all good job portraying all of the problems you faced with creating your avatars. From your reflection I can clearly see the issues of identity (both internal and external) and issues with the technology. You do a very good job of stating your method and how your avatars came to look like they do. I enjoy your points about the gender issues with the evolver software. The point you bring about evolver defaulting to only female options is often a hard aspect to struggle with and I can clearly see that through your comments. I like how your state that a lot of times male characteristics helped your avatars looked better for the tasks. While you do an excellent job stating all of the struggles and problems you faced I would have liked to see your external sources implemented more. While reading I felt that the sources you used helped strengthen the point you were making within the specific section but they did not help to show your overarching struggles or issues faced. I would have liked to see the sources implemented more generally then so specifically. Overall good work.

-T Arnold