Talk:Jared Cutlip
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While I understood your main points and it was interesting to read, there are a couple of things I had problems with. First, this reflection needs to be proofread pretty badly. I noticed several mechanical and grammatical mistakes that makes it tough for the reader to follow without getting distracted. These types of revisions are really easy to do and will make your reflection sound much more fluid to the reader.
