Talk:Jacky Fontaine

I too have always been interested in the counter-culture movements of the 1960s. I’m a musician and I’ve always found inspiration in the music of that time. Your red, white, blue and snakeskin clad tiger hippy scared me at first, but after reading through your reasoning for creating said creature, I applaud your creativity.

I thought the descriptions of the issues you encountered throughout your many attempts at creating a self-portrait avatar were thorough and well explained. I also found the molding of two parent avatars to be insufficient during the self-portrait avatar creation process. Like you, I used the cloning tool to create a self-portrait avatar that I found resembled myself decently enough, but was still slightly unsatisfactory in the end.

Your use of the Sims game as an outside resource to anchor your reflection in information outside your own opinion was a solid choice and you referenced it well throughout your fantasy avatar reflection. However, you didn’t include a formal citation for the Sims game at the end of your work. This was a requirement in the assignment prompt.

I found a few minor grammar errors, but none of them were a detriment to the idea you were expressing. The organization of your content is good and your writing style is natural.

-J Watts