Talk:Ashley Church

Hi Ashley,

I liked your point about how our perceptions of ourselves are skewed because we have been looking at ourselves way longer than anyone else has. I agree with you that we see the details in our face and body that we like and don’t like. A lot of the times, we think we look one way but others perceive us in another, so I see how building an accurate avatar of yourself that others can identify could be difficult. Throughout your reflection, you stated what you were looking for in your avatar, such as traits and personalities, addressed your concerns and reflected on the end result. The structure was clear and easy to read. However, I thought maybe you can expand a little more. Although it was very good that you made a very strong point about the importance of showing personality, it almost seemed like it was the only thing you talked about in your reflection. I felt some sentences overlapped a little often, reiterating the same point.

Your outside source was clearly cited with footnotes, and you integrated into your reflection well. I just wish you could’ve talk a little bit more about it. Maybe analyze the quote a little more and relate back to your experience. Overall, I liked the structure of the reflection. I think you did a good job with your avatars. And I can definitely get a sense of your personality, not just through your avatars, but also through your words.

--B Humphrey 02:26, 12 November 2011 (EST)