Talk:Philip Park

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Hey Phil, I'll break down my comments based on each section:

Introduction: I really like your introduction. You preface your experiences of social networks by noting your past history of Xanga, MySpace, and now Facebook. While you aren't an avid Facebook junky, you curate your Facebook in order to keep a balanced and representative avatar of your genuine identity. I also enjoy your sidebar bio thumbnail. It's decorative, informative, and draws the reader in.

TBC