Talk:Chloe Prince

Overall, I really like how you first used a third person's point of view to analyze your Facebok profile. Your choice of the six profile pictures which summarized your major characteristics provide me with many general ideas and some major points of how you are from the surface and how you present yourselves online. By diving the content into four main categories and using both your own reflection of yourselves and also others' possible interpretation of you from your Facebook page, I can clearly see how everything tied together at the end as a resemble of your theme, Honesty. Instead of using the typical "conclusion" to put bring everything together, you decided to use the topic "IT Relationship Over Time" to summarize how important online communication it is for you and how accurate your Facebook identity represents your offline interactions with others and your personality at a deeper level, which I thought was really creative and thoughtful.

I really enjoyed reading your Avatar; however, some things I think you can possibly improve on are providing more pictures of your Facebook page or the offline you to confirm your emphasis on how the important people who participate in your life and influence your identity are the ones who you interact with offline on the daily basis. Also, there might be a small mistake you made on the category. In your autobiography, you said you are currently a Senior but your categories at the very end shows that you are a Junior. Overall, I really like your Avatar entry. It includes detailed analysis about the online you, but at the same time, emphasizes the difference between your real identity and Facebook characteristics.