Talk:Face Filters

The length of the article met the requirements for the draft! I would definitely look to focus on expanding more upon the ethics portion of the wiki as, currently, it's relatively small and should be a big part of the assignment. You have the opening paragraph that summarizes the issue, but I do find the end of it a little wordy and confusing. Your first paragraph was great, though! I like the body of the wiki, as I’ve never really thought about the categorization of different filters. I think maybe within each category, you could try to include an image, as some are more difficult to visualize than others. You have some great, reliable sources included in this wiki page. I think trying to incorporate some more may be beneficial to strengthen your work. Try to include some references in sections other than just the ethical implications. Overall, I found your article and the issue it presents very clear. You described the issue surrounding face filters well, but I think the introduction paragraph could be written better. I noticed some grammatical problems, and the wording is a bit confusing. Also, make sure to have proper punctuation at the end of sentences. Lastly, it could be beneficial to elaborate more on what these face filters cause (further implications and importance of the issue). Maybe include this in another paragraph. I would say that overall you were very objective in your argument. No words or sentences stood out to me as biased. You also did an excellent job of backing up these ethical issues with references. However, I would ensure to include sections on the other side in your final draft. Some people argue for face filters, so it’s important to include this as well. In all, I think you did a really good job!