Talk:Harrison Crandall

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Hi Harrison,

This is a strong start. Your research and discussion of what information exists about you online is comprehensive. You begin to incorporate a little more of your opinion, like your fears about lack of anonymity online, and I think you could expand on this further to make your theme more clear. It's clear what someone could find about you if they looked you up online, but consider answering the question of: why should we care? You begin to express some concern about the ethical implications of this information existing, but your piece would be strengthened if you could dig a little deeper. What does all this existing information imply? Consider a discussion around the ethical implications of this and what you find morally acceptable/unacceptable. Nice work overall!

-Evon Yao

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