Talk:Kevin Lee

Hi Kevin,

I really enjoyed reading your article! I like how you talk about multiple identities throughout the paper such as your birth name, your name after coming to America, and your online username which can be linked to your reddit, and video game accounts. Having the picture of Kevin Lee the fighter really stands out and draws attention to your paper. One suggestion that I would try to make the transition a little bit more smooth from when you are talking about your facebook identity to your reddit identity, as I was slightly confused reading that portion. I would also try to add other photos that could help keep the readers attention later on in the paper. Overall I really liked this! Good job!

-Samarth Sarin