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Hi Sulayman! I really liked the structure of your data identity post, the information flowed and connected very well. Tying in the section about issues with airport security really highlights some of the ways the lack of data privacy can lead to violations and its wrongful use. I also really liked the way you incorporated your personal experiences with social media and other internet platforms from a young age at the start of the post. | Hi Sulayman! I really liked the structure of your data identity post, the information flowed and connected very well. Tying in the section about issues with airport security really highlights some of the ways the lack of data privacy can lead to violations and its wrongful use. I also really liked the way you incorporated your personal experiences with social media and other internet platforms from a young age at the start of the post. | ||
To improve, you could add some relevant pictures that make your arguments stronger and further support your point of view. Furthermore, you could add some more information about whether your public information available online is an accurate depiction of your true identity. Contrasting your “real life” with your “digital life” will certainly add to your post by bringing in an interesting perspective. On the whole, I enjoyed reading your post and it certainly made me think about how data could be violated in certain situations. | To improve, you could add some relevant pictures that make your arguments stronger and further support your point of view. Furthermore, you could add some more information about whether your public information available online is an accurate depiction of your true identity. Contrasting your “real life” with your “digital life” will certainly add to your post by bringing in an interesting perspective. On the whole, I enjoyed reading your post and it certainly made me think about how data could be violated in certain situations. | ||
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Ananya Sharma comment:
Hi Sulayman! I really liked the structure of your data identity post, the information flowed and connected very well. Tying in the section about issues with airport security really highlights some of the ways the lack of data privacy can lead to violations and its wrongful use. I also really liked the way you incorporated your personal experiences with social media and other internet platforms from a young age at the start of the post.
To improve, you could add some relevant pictures that make your arguments stronger and further support your point of view. Furthermore, you could add some more information about whether your public information available online is an accurate depiction of your true identity. Contrasting your “real life” with your “digital life” will certainly add to your post by bringing in an interesting perspective. On the whole, I enjoyed reading your post and it certainly made me think about how data could be violated in certain situations.
