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Overall I was really impressed with your Data Identity autobiography. I think the results of your Google searches on yourself were very interesting and you obviously put a lot of time and effort into finding information about yourself. I found your discovery of the strange PIKDO website to be especially intriguing and I am now planning to look into it myself to see if it has any information on me. One way I believe you could improve your autobiography would perhaps be to include some more discussion of material from class. One other possible area you could elaborate more on is your feelings over your family's personal data being found by the data broker report. You briefly mentioned this topic but didn't exactly say whether or not you were upset with the report finding information on them. One final note, I think you did an excellent job with the images you chose to include in your autobiography. The image from the old school presentation was especially striking as I know me and most other students have produced dozens of similar presentations throughout our time in education. | Overall I was really impressed with your Data Identity autobiography. I think the results of your Google searches on yourself were very interesting and you obviously put a lot of time and effort into finding information about yourself. I found your discovery of the strange PIKDO website to be especially intriguing and I am now planning to look into it myself to see if it has any information on me. One way I believe you could improve your autobiography would perhaps be to include some more discussion of material from class. One other possible area you could elaborate more on is your feelings over your family's personal data being found by the data broker report. You briefly mentioned this topic but didn't exactly say whether or not you were upset with the report finding information on them. One final note, I think you did an excellent job with the images you chose to include in your autobiography. The image from the old school presentation was especially striking as I know me and most other students have produced dozens of similar presentations throughout our time in education. | ||
Revision as of 17:34, 19 February 2020
Logan Niswander Comment: Overall I was really impressed with your Data Identity autobiography. I think the results of your Google searches on yourself were very interesting and you obviously put a lot of time and effort into finding information about yourself. I found your discovery of the strange PIKDO website to be especially intriguing and I am now planning to look into it myself to see if it has any information on me. One way I believe you could improve your autobiography would perhaps be to include some more discussion of material from class. One other possible area you could elaborate more on is your feelings over your family's personal data being found by the data broker report. You briefly mentioned this topic but didn't exactly say whether or not you were upset with the report finding information on them. One final note, I think you did an excellent job with the images you chose to include in your autobiography. The image from the old school presentation was especially striking as I know me and most other students have produced dozens of similar presentations throughout our time in education.
