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You give a good introductory paragraph about yourself and your background on using Facebook in a limited manner. This is useful because it lets the reader know that you do not use Facebook like how most other people use it. You use it for your future, so your Facebook is probably not the best representation of yourself. Your points about the authenticity of your profile are valid. The “likes” that you show on your Facebook and the pictures that you choose to present reveal only a side of yourself that is available online. They don’t show the full you, and you explain that in a clear manner. The things described about your privacy settings are consistent with the rest of the analysis, as limiting Facebook to revolving around helping with your future. | You give a good introductory paragraph about yourself and your background on using Facebook in a limited manner. This is useful because it lets the reader know that you do not use Facebook like how most other people use it. You use it for your future, so your Facebook is probably not the best representation of yourself. Your points about the authenticity of your profile are valid. The “likes” that you show on your Facebook and the pictures that you choose to present reveal only a side of yourself that is available online. They don’t show the full you, and you explain that in a clear manner. The things described about your privacy settings are consistent with the rest of the analysis, as limiting Facebook to revolving around helping with your future. | ||
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I thought that the analysis you provided throughout was concrete and very relevant to the assignment. Just another thing that you might want to fix is you have all of your sections under the “introduction” section. I think you probably meant to put them as different sections, but that’s easily fixable. Overall, the points you make are sharp and legitimate. You explain clearly that you use Facebook more as a networking tool rather as an outlet of social media, and back it up with how you do so. Only parts of yourself are shown through your Facebook, which you also explained. Well done! | I thought that the analysis you provided throughout was concrete and very relevant to the assignment. Just another thing that you might want to fix is you have all of your sections under the “introduction” section. I think you probably meant to put them as different sections, but that’s easily fixable. Overall, the points you make are sharp and legitimate. You explain clearly that you use Facebook more as a networking tool rather as an outlet of social media, and back it up with how you do so. Only parts of yourself are shown through your Facebook, which you also explained. Well done! | ||
-Philip | -Philip | ||
Revision as of 06:06, 21 November 2012
Hi Pierre,
You give a good introductory paragraph about yourself and your background on using Facebook in a limited manner. This is useful because it lets the reader know that you do not use Facebook like how most other people use it. You use it for your future, so your Facebook is probably not the best representation of yourself. Your points about the authenticity of your profile are valid. The “likes” that you show on your Facebook and the pictures that you choose to present reveal only a side of yourself that is available online. They don’t show the full you, and you explain that in a clear manner. The things described about your privacy settings are consistent with the rest of the analysis, as limiting Facebook to revolving around helping with your future.
I thought that the analysis you provided throughout was concrete and very relevant to the assignment. Just another thing that you might want to fix is you have all of your sections under the “introduction” section. I think you probably meant to put them as different sections, but that’s easily fixable. Overall, the points you make are sharp and legitimate. You explain clearly that you use Facebook more as a networking tool rather as an outlet of social media, and back it up with how you do so. Only parts of yourself are shown through your Facebook, which you also explained. Well done!
-Philip
