Difference between revisions of "Talk:Jackie Franklin"

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I think you did a really good job on your autobiography. It was interesting to read about your opinion of what Facebook is all about. By claiming that each user has an opportunity to portray themselves however they wish, it seems that Facebook really is not representative of its users. Anyone can shape their profile into a perfectly misleading display of the person they want others to see them as. I found your decision to display only carefully selected, appropriate photos to be a great example of how Facebook is not entirely representative of individuals. I think you were being genuine in your discussion of why you made your Facebook the way it is, and how you differ from it. You went into great depth about your photos, which was helpful in seeing the differences between who you are compared to your virtual identity. I think you did a great job in describing that aspect of your profile.

The format of your autobiography is very appealing. I appreciate the subheadings that break it up and make it easier to read. The pictures also were very relevant and added to the ideas you were talking about. I think the format, style, and quality of writing was exceptional. One change I would make would be to talk more about other aspects of your Facebook. You mentioned your About Me section and your posts in the last paragraph, but it would have added to the overall message if you could have expanded a bit more about those and how they do or do not represent you accurately. I was also curious as to why you spell your last name differently on your Facebook page. Maybe for extra privacy? An explanation about that would have been interesting. I really enjoyed reading this, great job!

Nicole Stencel

Hi, Jackie --