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I think you did a good job of explaining how there's a bias in terms how much of your real identity is displayed through your photos and posts on Facebook. People who don't see you every day could potentially misjudge you based on the posts and pictures that other people tag you in. I also don't post much original content so I understand where you're coming form. I also enjoyed how you separated your autobiography by visual and textual elements, but I think it could be improved by making the "Textual" and "Visual" sections into real headings by using two equal signs on both sides. This would create a content box and you could further separate the "Textual" section into subheadings that include status updates, wall posts, about me, etc. Otherwise, I think the article gives us a good understanding of how you use facebook, and it draws a good connection with your theme of authenticity. -Allen Wu | I think you did a good job of explaining how there's a bias in terms how much of your real identity is displayed through your photos and posts on Facebook. People who don't see you every day could potentially misjudge you based on the posts and pictures that other people tag you in. I also don't post much original content so I understand where you're coming form. I also enjoyed how you separated your autobiography by visual and textual elements, but I think it could be improved by making the "Textual" and "Visual" sections into real headings by using two equal signs on both sides. This would create a content box and you could further separate the "Textual" section into subheadings that include status updates, wall posts, about me, etc. Otherwise, I think the article gives us a good understanding of how you use facebook, and it draws a good connection with your theme of authenticity. -Allen Wu | ||
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| + | I think you did a really good job expressing the fact that your Facebook profile and your real world persona are not completely in sync. As a person who feels the same way about my own profile, I can relate to where you’re coming from. In doing so, I think a true piece of yourself is revealed to the reader. In terms of writing style, you have two main sections: Visual and Textual elements on your page, and I think this is a pretty good way to explore a Facebook identity, seeing as Pictures and status updates/wallposts make up almost all of what Facebook is. I think you could have potentially looked a little deeper into “Likes” and “Pages” in your profile. You touched on this a little, but I think you could have gone a bit deeper. Grammar and writing style is very professional and I enjoyed reading this from purely a technical standpoint. Good job. –Kevin Jensen | ||
Latest revision as of 23:27, 20 November 2012
I think you did a good job of explaining how there's a bias in terms how much of your real identity is displayed through your photos and posts on Facebook. People who don't see you every day could potentially misjudge you based on the posts and pictures that other people tag you in. I also don't post much original content so I understand where you're coming form. I also enjoyed how you separated your autobiography by visual and textual elements, but I think it could be improved by making the "Textual" and "Visual" sections into real headings by using two equal signs on both sides. This would create a content box and you could further separate the "Textual" section into subheadings that include status updates, wall posts, about me, etc. Otherwise, I think the article gives us a good understanding of how you use facebook, and it draws a good connection with your theme of authenticity. -Allen Wu
I think you did a really good job expressing the fact that your Facebook profile and your real world persona are not completely in sync. As a person who feels the same way about my own profile, I can relate to where you’re coming from. In doing so, I think a true piece of yourself is revealed to the reader. In terms of writing style, you have two main sections: Visual and Textual elements on your page, and I think this is a pretty good way to explore a Facebook identity, seeing as Pictures and status updates/wallposts make up almost all of what Facebook is. I think you could have potentially looked a little deeper into “Likes” and “Pages” in your profile. You touched on this a little, but I think you could have gone a bit deeper. Grammar and writing style is very professional and I enjoyed reading this from purely a technical standpoint. Good job. –Kevin Jensen
