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Hi Malaysha! Wow! I really enjoyed reading your article! I can tell you have a great sense of humor and really enjoy showcasing that through your social media. I thought your analysis of how you use social media (if you are active versus lurking) and how it effects your self-esteem was extremely interesting and I found that the results sort of apply to me as well. I think for your revision, it would be beneficial to add more examples of the type of posts you do and how/why you were more willing to self-present yourself more truthfully now than before. I think you could definitely tie this with the self-presentation and privacy readings for class. Overall, great job and I am looking forward to reading more of your articles! -Jamie Leeds | Hi Malaysha! Wow! I really enjoyed reading your article! I can tell you have a great sense of humor and really enjoy showcasing that through your social media. I thought your analysis of how you use social media (if you are active versus lurking) and how it effects your self-esteem was extremely interesting and I found that the results sort of apply to me as well. I think for your revision, it would be beneficial to add more examples of the type of posts you do and how/why you were more willing to self-present yourself more truthfully now than before. I think you could definitely tie this with the self-presentation and privacy readings for class. Overall, great job and I am looking forward to reading more of your articles! -Jamie Leeds | ||
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| + | hi laysha! your article was fun, and i liked the way you used examples of your evolving use of social media to exemplify your awareness of what it means to maintain a "clean and professional" presence online. you also provided an authentic window into what your online activity says about you, and what shapes the content you associate with yourself. i also liked your description of how social media affects your self-esteem on a daily basis—it was thought provoking, and maybe you could bring in a related reading to further the idea. when describing what someone would learn about you based on your profile, you could also delve more into the ramifications of being fully transparent on social media. great job overall! —matt wolfgram | ||
Revision as of 20:52, 21 February 2018
Hi Malaysha! Wow! I really enjoyed reading your article! I can tell you have a great sense of humor and really enjoy showcasing that through your social media. I thought your analysis of how you use social media (if you are active versus lurking) and how it effects your self-esteem was extremely interesting and I found that the results sort of apply to me as well. I think for your revision, it would be beneficial to add more examples of the type of posts you do and how/why you were more willing to self-present yourself more truthfully now than before. I think you could definitely tie this with the self-presentation and privacy readings for class. Overall, great job and I am looking forward to reading more of your articles! -Jamie Leeds
hi laysha! your article was fun, and i liked the way you used examples of your evolving use of social media to exemplify your awareness of what it means to maintain a "clean and professional" presence online. you also provided an authentic window into what your online activity says about you, and what shapes the content you associate with yourself. i also liked your description of how social media affects your self-esteem on a daily basis—it was thought provoking, and maybe you could bring in a related reading to further the idea. when describing what someone would learn about you based on your profile, you could also delve more into the ramifications of being fully transparent on social media. great job overall! —matt wolfgram
