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"Overall, I really enjoyed your post about your social media experience with LinkedIn. Your story of your journey with LinkedIn followed the prompt – it dealt with the intricacies of you using the site and was not completely about you as a person. I think your piece would benefit on adding some information about how you’ve used the platform over time. Have your uses of it changed over the years, less from bragging and more towards blogging/journalism (or other possible uses of the website)? Also, I think you should speak less about the features that LinkedIn offers its users unless they directly deal with your interaction with the platform. However, in speaking about the features that LinkedIn offers, you bring up the interesting point of misrepresentation – a discrepancy between your online and offline identity – and the commonality of bragging. I think those are interesting topics, and it could be interesting to further craft your piece around what you do on the site and then tie it back even more to those themes. Why do you use LinkedIn if it facilitates bragging and a distorted version of who you are, your interests, and goals? And why aren’t you concerned with the false perception of who you are? Why don’t you change it from the views of your high school self?" | "Overall, I really enjoyed your post about your social media experience with LinkedIn. Your story of your journey with LinkedIn followed the prompt – it dealt with the intricacies of you using the site and was not completely about you as a person. I think your piece would benefit on adding some information about how you’ve used the platform over time. Have your uses of it changed over the years, less from bragging and more towards blogging/journalism (or other possible uses of the website)? Also, I think you should speak less about the features that LinkedIn offers its users unless they directly deal with your interaction with the platform. However, in speaking about the features that LinkedIn offers, you bring up the interesting point of misrepresentation – a discrepancy between your online and offline identity – and the commonality of bragging. I think those are interesting topics, and it could be interesting to further craft your piece around what you do on the site and then tie it back even more to those themes. Why do you use LinkedIn if it facilitates bragging and a distorted version of who you are, your interests, and goals? And why aren’t you concerned with the false perception of who you are? Why don’t you change it from the views of your high school self?" | ||
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Revision as of 02:14, 21 February 2018
"Overall, I really enjoyed your post about your social media experience with LinkedIn. Your story of your journey with LinkedIn followed the prompt – it dealt with the intricacies of you using the site and was not completely about you as a person. I think your piece would benefit on adding some information about how you’ve used the platform over time. Have your uses of it changed over the years, less from bragging and more towards blogging/journalism (or other possible uses of the website)? Also, I think you should speak less about the features that LinkedIn offers its users unless they directly deal with your interaction with the platform. However, in speaking about the features that LinkedIn offers, you bring up the interesting point of misrepresentation – a discrepancy between your online and offline identity – and the commonality of bragging. I think those are interesting topics, and it could be interesting to further craft your piece around what you do on the site and then tie it back even more to those themes. Why do you use LinkedIn if it facilitates bragging and a distorted version of who you are, your interests, and goals? And why aren’t you concerned with the false perception of who you are? Why don’t you change it from the views of your high school self?"
-- Chalse Okorom
I am going to comment on this blog.
-Amelia Cacchione
