Difference between revisions of "Talk:Erica Silverman"
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| − | I really enjoyed reading this entry. You set up the sections of this entry in a way that made it really easy to read and follow the journey of yourself through social media. Separating your uses of both Facebook and Instagram into past and present uses of the technology was a very interesting and valuable way to organize your ideas. You also did a good job of mentioning your transition between the two social media platforms. | + | I really enjoyed reading this entry. You set up the sections of this entry in a way that made it really easy to read and follow the journey of yourself through social media. Separating your uses of both Facebook and Instagram into past and present uses of the technology was a very interesting and valuable way to organize your ideas. You also did a good job of mentioning your transition between the two social media platforms. Something you could elaborate on is the fear you have about the privacy of your accounts. You mentioned that you don't want people to be able to know everything about you but you could also talk about if you feel the need to have control over your own information/identity. You also might want to fix some of the photo layouts so that they are clustered together more rather than on both sides of the page; it just made it a little difficult to follow the text at some points. Overall this is a really good piece and I think you do a good job of discussing your identity as shown through your online profiles. -- Megan Lakkides |
Revision as of 17:47, 19 February 2018
I really enjoyed reading this entry. You set up the sections of this entry in a way that made it really easy to read and follow the journey of yourself through social media. Separating your uses of both Facebook and Instagram into past and present uses of the technology was a very interesting and valuable way to organize your ideas. You also did a good job of mentioning your transition between the two social media platforms. Something you could elaborate on is the fear you have about the privacy of your accounts. You mentioned that you don't want people to be able to know everything about you but you could also talk about if you feel the need to have control over your own information/identity. You also might want to fix some of the photo layouts so that they are clustered together more rather than on both sides of the page; it just made it a little difficult to follow the text at some points. Overall this is a really good piece and I think you do a good job of discussing your identity as shown through your online profiles. -- Megan Lakkides
