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I enjoyed reading through this self-reflection. I found it to be very relatable in many ways, especially regarding how I used to use Facebook, only posting to amass likes and feel like what I had to say was important to others (I really liked that line in your writing). I also found your discussion about leaving some of your profile blank engaging. It draws a nice line as to where you think Facebook you ends and the real you begins. If people don't know what WOULD fill those empty spaces in your about page, then is it really worth it to view yourself based on if they liked your last photo or not? I would agree with you that it is definitely not that important. My main suggestion would be to add a couple more images to your post, if not to better illustrate your reflections, at the very least to bring a little more aesthetic flair to the piece. Overall though, to me, this is a very good and reflective piece and really shows how deeply you thought about what Facebook used to and currently does mean to your sense of self. Good job! | I enjoyed reading through this self-reflection. I found it to be very relatable in many ways, especially regarding how I used to use Facebook, only posting to amass likes and feel like what I had to say was important to others (I really liked that line in your writing). I also found your discussion about leaving some of your profile blank engaging. It draws a nice line as to where you think Facebook you ends and the real you begins. If people don't know what WOULD fill those empty spaces in your about page, then is it really worth it to view yourself based on if they liked your last photo or not? I would agree with you that it is definitely not that important. My main suggestion would be to add a couple more images to your post, if not to better illustrate your reflections, at the very least to bring a little more aesthetic flair to the piece. Overall though, to me, this is a very good and reflective piece and really shows how deeply you thought about what Facebook used to and currently does mean to your sense of self. Good job! | ||
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Hey Courtney!
I enjoyed reading through this self-reflection. I found it to be very relatable in many ways, especially regarding how I used to use Facebook, only posting to amass likes and feel like what I had to say was important to others (I really liked that line in your writing). I also found your discussion about leaving some of your profile blank engaging. It draws a nice line as to where you think Facebook you ends and the real you begins. If people don't know what WOULD fill those empty spaces in your about page, then is it really worth it to view yourself based on if they liked your last photo or not? I would agree with you that it is definitely not that important. My main suggestion would be to add a couple more images to your post, if not to better illustrate your reflections, at the very least to bring a little more aesthetic flair to the piece. Overall though, to me, this is a very good and reflective piece and really shows how deeply you thought about what Facebook used to and currently does mean to your sense of self. Good job!
Travis Latchaw II
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