Talk:Value Sensitive Design

Really nice start. Your writing is clear. I would, however, like to see the Ethics section framed more clearly by course concepts. You may find it helpful to move the Problems section to the Ethics section, and explaining why the problems have ethical implications. It could be made more clear to the reader what the ethical concerns are, and what ties these ethical concerns together. I think grounding this more in course material could help provide a framework for the reader to use to think about your topic.

Elizabeth Whittaker