Talk:Testimonials

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Really nice start. Your writing is clear, this is very thorough, and you incorporate outside material well. I would, however, like to see you frame your ethical discussion with course concepts, instead of sprinkling them throughout that section. It could be made more clear to the reader what ties these ethical concerns together. I think grounding this more in course material could help provide a framework for the reader to use to think about your topic.

Elizabeth Whittaker