Talk:Patrick Tse

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Your article was very clear and concise. I liked the way that you broke the different social media platforms into different sections so the analysis of each section was very clear. It was easy to follow and jump to different sections. I liked that you added a conclusion as well. I also liked how you went down every possible rabbit hole for your name and were able to find out any information that you could about yourself. I liked the section about the in-game purchases and the different types of money, I thought that was really interesting.



Hi Patrick! I enjoyed reading your data identity statement, and I really like the point you made about how your decision to keep your Linkedin account as the most public is a political decision. I ran into this with my own Linkedin as well. I think that it would also be interesting to hear more about what this could say about your identity from the point of view of, for example, someone who is hiring. I also really liked the point you made about how video games gather data that only affects your gameplay, but nothing else. I think something that could improve your article is adding a little bit more to your introduction, maybe about the data that gaming companies have about you, and what that says about you. Overall, great job! - Sadhana Ramaseshadri