Talk:Need For Speed (Video Game Series)

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This article has great potential, especially if it is viewed as part of a group of articles that explore the issues of videogaming. The overview section should be recast as the lead that appears above the index. Simply deleting the subhead and rewriting will do that. The list of version releases is best set up as a table as so many wikipedia articles do that cover games. Someone can probably grab and modify existing code for a table. The references need full citations, as is the case with so many of the first cut articles. Finally, in terms of writing style, the ethics section has three parts, but subheadings would be best and then modify and edit the language to use active instead of passive voice. Doing that will make the section punchier and force a clearer presentation of evidence in the text itself.