Talk:Music piracy

Really nice start. Your writing is clear, and you incorporate course concepts well. I would, however, like to see you frame your ethical discussion with course concepts, instead of sprinkling them throughout that section. It could be made more clear to the reader what ties these ethical concerns together. I think grounding this more in course material could help provide a framework for the reader to use to think about your topic. Generally, I don't think Pros and Cons are that helpful in an "Ethics" section. Perhaps instead it might be better to have different sub-sections for each ethical issue, and explain the thoughts (pro and con) around that issue below.

Elizabeth Whittaker