Talk:Morgan Tucker

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Zhen Lian's Review

Hey Morgan, I enjoyed reading about your views on your personal data identity. Your introduction clearly stated your argument and it made it easy to understand the rest of your writing. The contents in your writing had a very good logical flow and good transitions from one point to the next. It was clear that your analysis reflected your data identity statement. In addition, the placements of your ideas were perfectly separated, and it made the writing much easier to follow. One suggestion I have is to talk more about the information you got from Checkmate. Was the information outdated? Was there anything that surprised you or that you expected as a result, but didn’t show? Overall, I think you did great exploring your data identity with detailed analysis of the results of your searches.

Morgan Cary's Review

Hi Morgan, I thought that you did a terrific job digging up information about yourself, and thoroughly enjoyed reading your draft! Your writing flowed in a very concise manner, which made understanding your entries especially easy. You left little up for interpretation, and did a fantastic and very thorough job of searching for yourself online. It was clear that you put a lot of effort into your research, and it definitely paid off. If I could make any suggestions, I would recommend maybe expanding descriptions of your social media/online presence (if you are comfortable doing so, of course). Also, was there anything that surprised you about the results? Did you encounter anything unexpected during your search? Again, great job!