Talk:Molly Wu

Peer Review by Mackenzie Cole

Hi Molly! You had a very thorough explanation of your search methods and the results they yielded. Unlike many other students, you framed your Data Identity as your tools for promotion. I think knowing that you promote your art across platforms allowed you to know what will come up. It was helpful to see you rank your common search results. I wonder, how did this project help you reconsider your promotion methods? Or which accounts do you wish came up first versus last? Your separation of your Artist Identity and Personal Identity allowed for your ability to maintain privacy while expanding your audience, this is very smart of you. The authenticity is very clear. In terms of your writing, I would love to see more of your voice come out. Perhaps more commentary on your initial reactions or an expansion of how your art style translates into your data identity. Additionally, I think changing your headers for each section would make it an easier read by breaking up each paragraph with bold text. If you have any art that would correspond with identity or the online world, that would also supplement this page amazingly!