Talk:Ethical game design

Really nice start. Your writing is clear, and you incorporate outside material well. I would, however, like to see you frame your ethical discussion with course concepts. It could be made more clear to the reader what ties these ethical concerns together. I think grounding this more in course material could help provide a framework for the reader to use to think about your topic. Also, you only need 1 footnote for each reference (So, if you refer to X reading 3 times, you cite X 3 times in line, but only once in your references).

Elizabeth Whittaker